The three points that I am making in my body paragraph are that the author uses large ways of being dishonest to drive the play along, the characters to pursue their pleasure, and to protect their relatives. My commentary takes place on pages 12, 64, and 48.
Jack: How should I make my conclusion to set you up for your body paragraph?
Mikaela: How are you making the small ways of being dishonest tie in to the play and your paper?
Mrs. Gilman: If my partners don"t make a blog, meaning I can't comment on their blog, does that mean I get marked down points for not doing it?
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you mean collaboration? hahaha sorry.. i just had to
ReplyDeleteMichael, Your conclusion should readily bring up that the characters are deceiving to their own gain. So that they may gain pleasure so I can transition to that swiftly.
ReplyDeleteWell im showing how the author uses dishonesty through small "white" lies to pursue each characters personal happiness as pointed out in our planned thesis statement. The concrete details that we decided on did not match so I think that we are good there.
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