Essay Writing: Challenges and Conguests

I have developed in many ways from the start of the school year. I have learned that I am not a bad writer, and because of that I hav eworked harder and have grown to love writing. Through the skills taught me through the ages yes, I do think I have become a good, and developing, essayist. Literary analysis is to dig deeper into literature so that you get a deeper understanding than what you would get when you just read over the source. It shows you themes, what the author is thinking, life lessons, character traits that could apply to you, and what life was like the time the author wrote the novel. It also provides challenges in that you don't always know what the author is saying at certain times, and you might not catch on to the symbolisms and motifs that may have a crucial part of the overall theme. When you screw those up you are looking for embarassement and/or a bad grade on an essay. The reward is that when you do get what the author is saying you get to look into the author's eyes and see a deeper understanding of the novel.

My shortcomings of essay are as follows: Weak hook, essay shows logical thought and reasoning but lacks original ideas, imprecise or repetitive diction, repetetive use of "this shows" in essay, and my transitions may be rough or lacking sometime. When I write an essay from the beginning these mistakes might take a role in the overall outcome of my grade. But, through rewriting and wonderful editing done by my friends, family members, and myslef, the essay gets polished and takes small steps towards perfaction. So I have my mistakes, but editing will solve thos, hopefully. Overall, I think that I will be noted on my logical thought and reasoning, but my lack for original ideas. Thank you for reading.

Summer Reading List

This summer, when I am on the couch doing nothing, I will read two books. My first book is called The Pacific, and is written by Hugh Ambrose. My second book is called We Die Alone, and is written by David Howarth. I have been meaning to read these World War II non-fiction novels for some time, but all they have done is collected dust off of my shelf. Both of these books were given to me as gifts, and I am very excited to read them. This first book, is about a couple men who fought in the pacific theater. The next book is about a man who is stranded from his squad and is being chased by Nazis through the freezing cold. It is about his survival story. Both books are supposed to be great reads and I am very excited. Let summer come!

Theme and Motif: Fate

According to my birth date's astrology, I am a very unsocial but very wise person. It also says I am very irrirtable to live with because of my "higher standard of expectation," and it makes me grouchy. Then it goes on saying that I am a peaceful and affectionate soul. I am also charming and refined. I was born in The Chinese Year of the Dog. Looking at this information, if you want to call it that, I call it garbage. Some things I agree with, like my dislike of confusion, but isn't that everybody? I disagree with these thing because sometimes I think they make traits that are compatible with almost anybody. For example: not liking confusion.

In the same way, I think that in Romeo and Juliet when they use the stars to determine their fate, it is taking it a step too far. I think that having a bad feeling about something, like the calm before the storm, is all right, but not looking up to the heavans and seeing something (or by analyzing your birth date). Similarly, in act three when Juliet says that the fate is cast in the stars, so to speak, I think it's kind of strange. Overall, I don't agree that your fate is "cast in the stars", but, like most people, I find it entertaining to see the information behind the astrology of your birth date. I think in Romeo and Juliet they use it as direct meaning to their fate, but I think it also gives them something to vent on, or blame, when something bad does actually happen.